-Very conventional (especially the model overlap)
-Instantly recognisable as a music magazine
-Need to include more featured stories
-More attitude needed on photos
-Doesn't fit the nautical theme; it needs to have something small added, such as a wave in the title.
-Could perhaps add a bar along the bottom with extra featured stories on
-Headline too vague; add a shadow as well.
Student Feedback:
-Good variety of images use
-Good title and date
-Needs more text about images and other articles in the magazine
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